I find the straight lines that make up large parts of the image quite hard and blocky for the tone of the whole piece.
Sections like the leafy clusters seem quite odd with all of the angles when I'm expecting them to be more organic for instance.
Equally I think it's a case of mixing up the composition somewhat. like, a bit of me would like to see the top left of the house's roof curving inward a bit rather than being a hard edge like the shape of the rest of the house.
Don't let any of this detract from the fact that I think you're doing a great job of doing architectural stuff! cool stuff!
Ahh, okay I getcha. Yeah I did feel some of this was a bit awkward but I think that's a lot to do with the fairly unplanned way I went about it. I can see places where it could be improved but this was such a time consuming and fiddly piece to do that I frankly couldn't be bothered and was happy enough with it as it was. Working entirely with transparencies was a pain in the ass.